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12/12/2020 c2 Guest
"It was her who booked..." It's "It was SHE." Subject pronouns (I, we, he, she, they) always follow linking verbs (is, are, was, were, be, been, being).
11/22/2020 c22 ChrisDGoosey
Yes, I can see that there may be a couple of loose ends to tie up (and, of course, the Renee showdown) but I’m happy for the story to end here. It’s beautifully written. Thank you...
And now on to the next one
11/22/2020 c19 ChrisDGoosey
This could be the ending. Anything after is just a bonus. You have a real talent with words and portrayal of emotions. Thank you
11/22/2020 c17 ChrisDGoosey
Oh, perfectly done! Bravo.
11/22/2020 c16 ChrisDGoosey
Yea, so definitely not team Renee. I’m really glad to have learned what happened, though.
11/22/2020 c15 ChrisDGoosey
It has just been pointed out to me that this story isn’t actually complete. I have no idea how I missed that - I just hope it gets to the bit I’m waiting for!
11/22/2020 c14 ChrisDGoosey
Bella is taking far too long with this. There is no excuse.
11/22/2020 c12 ChrisDGoosey
What a brilliant idea - and will provide a lot of opportunity for drama! Did I mention that I am very glad I am reading this completed!
11/22/2020 c8 ChrisDGoosey
Sliding doors! Your goodbye scene hit with a real punch. I felt Bella’s absolute shock and horror as her whole life changed. I have things I should be doing...but perhaps just one more chapter...
11/21/2020 c7 ChrisDGoosey
I am so grateful that I’m reading this completed. I know I will find out what happened this very day! This is so well written.
11/21/2020 c6 ChrisDGoosey
He’s outta’there!
11/21/2020 c5 ChrisDGoosey
Wow! Beautifully written. This is so good.
11/21/2020 c4 ChrisDGoosey
Oh, this is getting interesting. What did Renée do?
11/21/2020 c3 ChrisDGoosey
Your Edward can usually tell within the first hour of waking up what sort of day it was going to turn out to be. Similarly, I can usually tell during the first page of a book if I’m going to enjoy the writing style. Forget the actual story, this is about flowing, descriptive sentences that just ooze emotion. I’m going to go out there and say that I’m going to love this story! I am so looking forward to finding out what the hell happened.
11/21/2020 c2 ChrisDGoosey
This is looking very good. Very promising!
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